I wonder what people use for exclamations and expletives in their SciFi writing.
Bearing in mind that humans are verbal creatures, even if they may be operating elsewhere in the solar system, in distant galaxies, or even in parallel universes, what do characters say when they are shocked out of their normal equilibrium or to add emphasis?
Does one try to form words and phrases which reflect the particular speculative situation, or is it best to stick with those in
common usage in our 21st society?
Here is a list of some the words and phrases I use. Some of them are exclusive, to my work in progress and reflect the characters of that single novel. I am happy for anyone to use any of the words listed, but I would be very interested to learn what other Scifi writers do about supplying these patches of colour.
Spacelight!
Stardeath!
Black space!
Cosmic spirits!
What on Earth?
Gods!
Blast!/Damn!/Bastard!/Hell!
Meta Max!
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Thomas WeaverMy twin would probably say that, since what characters in (most of) his novels are saying has been translated from thirtieth-century Normarish into twenty-first-century English anyway, there's no sense in keeping their cussing in the original Normarish... moreMy twin would probably say that, since what characters in (most of) his novels are saying has been translated from thirtieth-century Normarish into twenty-first-century English anyway, there's no sense in keeping their cussing in the original Normarish (assuming it's any different) rather than translating that, too. There is one character in the latter novels who is fluent in the same dialect of English his author speaks, but I'm sure he's picked up some 'colorful metaphors' from the languages of non-human cultures, too. (By the time the current WIP is written, he will have had plenty of opportunity to learn several more.) As we've always joked about another of the secondary characters, 'Drake doesn't cuss; he utters maledictions.' (Actually, I'm rather certain he cusses, but it just sounds more impressive in either of his native languages.) less
Dawn R. SchuldenfreiAs a reader, anything that flowed naturally would be fine by me. If the character is from an earth-based culture, earth-based swearing matches. And if they aren't, I usually assume it's a translation, as long as it isn't a specific earth reference (no... moreAs a reader, anything that flowed naturally would be fine by me. If the character is from an earth-based culture, earth-based swearing matches. And if they aren't, I usually assume it's a translation, as long as it isn't a specific earth reference (no proper names, places, etc.). But I also like creative swearing that fits the different environment, as long as it's not so creative it jerks me out of the story. The example that's coming to mind at the moment are is out of fantasy: "empty night," an invective from the Harry Dresden series. It's different, appropriate to the character, but not so bizarre I spend a lot of time thinking about it instead of the story. less
Thomas WeaverYeah, what Dawn said. Also, if it's not from a contemporary (or real historical) Earth-based culture, it should be something that makes sense for swearing. One of the few things Orson Scott Card says about writing that I AGREE with is that you shouldn't... moreYeah, what Dawn said. Also, if it's not from a contemporary (or real historical) Earth-based culture, it should be something that makes sense for swearing. One of the few things Orson Scott Card says about writing that I AGREE with is that you shouldn't make up ridiculous "swear words" that people wouldn't actually say. He used the example (can't recall whose stories it came from) of "tanj" (from the acronym for "there ain't no justice") as what NOT to do if you find it necessary to make up such words/expressions. Apparently the author who came up with that one used it in all its variations -- noun, verb, adjective, etc. -- the way many real people use a certain f-word: 'Tanj it! What the tanj do you think you're doing, you tanj-ing tanj-head?' Don't be that writer... unless you're going for satire, in which case, ridiculous fake swear words are totally appropriate. less